Lord of the Flies: Golding Reduces the Power of his Message


I think that, while the boys experience immense bad luck due to
the author, the story still proves its point. It is still possible
though, that the bad luck of the boys could have been experienced
in real life. I think that without this bad luck, the point of the
story wouldn\'t be as great, because without the restraint\'s
Golding placed on the boys, life on the island would have been too
easy for the boys.

The major constraint that Golding puts on the boys is the
personality clash between Jack and Ralph. From the beginning, when
Ralph is elected leader, Jack hates Ralph, and towards the end of
the book, the feeling becomes mutual. Without Jack and Ralph\'s
problems, life would have been easy, and the \'darkness of man\'s
heart\' would not have been conveyed to the reader. Jack shows \'the
darkness\' and if he and Ralph had just been friends, there would
never have been an opportunity for Jack to show this darkness
which lurked beneath the surface.

Golding also uses the dead pilot conveniently against the boys -
the way in which he is caught in the trees just in the right
position to be caught by the wind and look like the beast and the
way the wind picks up after Simon has let him down from the trees
and carries him out to sea, so that the other boys cannot see that
it wasn\'t a beast. The author uses the boy\'s fear against them,
and although this could possibly happen in the situation, Golding
uses it as a weapon against them, their morale and their
companionship. I think that the boys split up and go to Jack
because of the fear - he can kill the beast, he can get them meat,
and if they ever get upset, he can start a dance and all will be
fine.

The whole message of the story is about the \'darkness of man\'s
heart\', which exists in everyone. To emphasise this side of human
nature, the author had to make a situation where it was possible
to display these characteristics. It would have been impossible
for Golding to get his point across without these constraints, and
even if it is thought that the story comes out too neatly, I think
that the story was written to make a point, and Golding has
achieved that.